Comments for lunch on tuesday

Comment on no flipping coins by rachel

rachel — Tue, 25 May 2010 14:47:48 +0000

hee!!!

Comment on distances by rachel

rachel — Tue, 25 May 2010 14:47:15 +0000

i love this one.

Comment on distances by dadoo

dadoo — Thu, 06 May 2010 13:30:33 +0000

I hope you don’t stop here. This latest set of poems (April 2010) were beautifully written and seemed authentic in terms of your felt experience.
Mom and I looked forward to coming upstairs to seek the next one every night before we went to bed. It was a little gift every night that we would each read, contemplate and maybe talk about.

Comment on foreign by one more believer

one more believer — Wed, 28 Apr 2010 01:57:52 +0000

displaced is an awkward feeling…. thaz probably y i have yet to return… thou there is a sadness reflected this flows so well and so light it is hard to be so… release engage

Comment on foreign by J. D. Mackenzie

J. D. Mackenzie — Wed, 28 Apr 2010 01:30:14 +0000

This feeling can be both a blessing and a curse, depending on the past. The image here makes us wonder…

Comment on room with a view by Evelyn N. Alfred

Evelyn N. Alfred — Tue, 27 Apr 2010 02:06:51 +0000

Oooh, this poem is like Burger King french fries. Yum.

Robin put it a bit more eloquently than I did. :-)

Comment on room with a view by Robin

Robin — Mon, 26 Apr 2010 23:40:31 +0000

I like this poem a lot. It captures the fact that we sometimes need our space and distance from those we love…in order to reconnect or reestablish whatever it is that keeps us close. Well done!

Comment on the story so far by Jessica GC

Jessica GC — Sun, 25 Apr 2010 02:05:23 +0000

This is very much worth a read… or two… or three (that’s how many times I read it).

Great job!

Comment on transmutation by Linda

Linda — Fri, 23 Apr 2010 22:37:47 +0000

Love where you went with the idea.

Comment on transmutation by pamela

pamela — Fri, 23 Apr 2010 21:44:16 +0000

Nicely done!
Pamela